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一
When my father bought me a computer as a birthday gift for 1 __________
me in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers 2 __________
are getting more and more usefully now. Much information can 3 __________
be stored in them. We can also learn that has lately happened 4 __________
in the world on the internet. In the past, people had to do lots of 5 __________
work which was very dangerous. Now, but, computers can do it 6 __________
instead. When an exam is coming, I often did some exercises 7 __________
on my computer. Then it will correct it and tell me the right 8 __________
answers. In this way it is very convenient for me to prepare 9 __________
the exam than before. The computer has become my real friend. 10 _________
二
In 10th April this year, as Li Ming was leaving his home in 1 __________
the morning, he got into the lift together a woman. When the lift 2 __________
got to the four floor, it stopped and a middle-aged 3 __________
man enter. Once the man got in, he snatched the woman’s 4 __________
handbag. He pulled both Li Ming and the woman out of the 5 __________
lift. Li Ming ran downstairs. When he reached for the ground 6 __________
floor, he saw the man walked out. He told the caretaker 7 __________
at once and they both followed the thief to a restaurant 8 __________
nearby which they met two policemen. Li Ming told them all 9 __________
about the case and the thief has finally caught. 10 _________
三
One day last week I went a walk in the country. 1 __________
In the morning the weather was well and the sun was 2 __________
shining; the sky was blue and there were no could. 3 __________
Soon a cool wind started blown and black clouds 4 __________
were covered the sun and then it started to rain. 5 __________
There were no houses in sight, but I got very wet.6 __________
After a hour or so, I managed to catch a bus which 7 __________
took me home. But when I arrived I was shivering 8 __________
and I knew I had caught a bad cold. I must 9 __________
have taken my coat. I had nothing to do but to10 _________
stay at home and wait for a doctor.
答案
一、
1.去掉me 2. 去掉in 3. usefully― useful 4. that ―what 5. 正确
6. but―however 7.did―do 8.第二个it―them 9. very―more 10. the前加for
二、
1.together后加with2.four改为fourth 3.enter 改为 entered 4.pulled改为pushed 5.for去掉
6.walked 改为walking7.正确 8.which改为where 9.has改为was
三、
1. wentfor. go后可以接v-ing; to do sth.; for sth.
2. wellfine/nice. well作“健康”讲是adj.,作“好”讲是adv.。
3.couldclouds应该用复数,否则为…was not a cloud.
4.blownblowing. start后可以接to do或doing.
5.去掉were,此处应该用主动语态。6.butso前后为因果关系。
7.第一个aan。 8.√
9.mustshould, must have done表示现在对过去的推测;should have done
表示过去该做的事而没有做,且带有责备意味。
10.去掉第二个to, but前面有do的不同形式时,后面的不定式不带to。