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原文作者：佚名
（一）
when i first learned to write in english， i ran into 1.______
much difficulties. the main problem was that i always thought 2.______
in chinese and tried to translate anything into english. 3.______
my teacher advised me to keep my diary. i followed her 4.______
advice and should put down 100 words or so each day. 5.______
soon i began to enjoy talk to myself as i was 6.______
learning to express me in simple english. one day i wrote 7.______
a story and showed to my teacher. he liked it very much 8.______
and reads it to the class. all said that the story was 9.______
a good one. their word were a great encouragement to me. 10.______
（二）
dear xiaohua，
it is four days since mother accepted the operation. 1.______
she is feeling much more better. the doctors told me 2.______
the operation was successful， but because her old age 3.______
she had to stay in hospital for other two weeks. the 4.______
doctors also say it was quite necessary for her to 5.______
do so. we expect to get a full report in two and three 6.______
days. please tell the good news to the rest of family 7.______
as soon as possible. you needn’t to come here. i’m 8.______
able to look after mother by myself. you’d better 9.______
send flowers to mother. she will feel happily. 10.______
yours， xiaohui
（三） [论文网]
tom had retired and lived lonely a long 1._______
way from town. he hardly never left his home. but 2._______
one day he went to town buy some things in the 3._______
market， and after he had bought it， he went 4._______
into a restaurant and sit down at a table by himself. 5._______
when he looked around， he saw several old peoples 6._______
put on glasses before reading their newspapers. so 7._______
after the lunch he decided to go to a store to buy 8._______
himself a pair of glasses， either， he walked 9._______
along a wide street and fast found a store. 10.______
（四）
my parents were all standing there， shouting at each other. 1.______
the word “divorce[离婚]” was repeated and broke my heart each time.
i had trapped between them and didn’t know what to do. 2.______
a million thoughts rushed into my mind， but nothing of them could 3.______
ease my feelings. i rushed back to my room， seated down in 4.______
silence and stared out of the window. the leaves were floating in air. 5.______
they struggled trying to catch the wind and finally they had to fall 6.______
on the ground. i knew i was not the only one had gone through this. but 7.______
i must learn to fight against this. later in the day i took up with a pen 8.______
and wrote down “it is until i take a step back and look at
my family 9.______
that i can really appreciate this thing has helped me grow strong and 10._____
mature[成熟].”
（五）
dear editor，
in the past my hometown was used to be a beautiful place. 1.______
thick trees and green grass could be seen in everywhere. in 2.______
order to build house and grow more crops， people cut down 3.______
more and more trees. with time went on， the whole forest was 4.______
almost destroyed. gradually the green hills have changed into 5.______
wasteland. as a result， sandstorms struck us now and then， from 6.______
which we suffer a lot. however， i do hope all the people should 7.______
realize the terribly result of not caring about our environment. 8.______
what’s more， they should take good care of the forests and plant 9.______
trees instead cutting them down to improve our living conditions. 10._____
（一）
1.√ 2.manymuch 3.anythingeverything 4.mya
5.去掉should 6.talktalking 7.memyself 8.to前加it
9.readsread 10.wordwords
（二）
1. acceptedreceived 2. 去掉more 3. because后加of 4.otheranother 5. saysaid 6. andor
7. family前加the 8. 去掉to 9. √ 10. happilyhappy
（三）
1. lonelyalone 2. neverever 3.buy前加to
4. itthem 5. sitsat 6.peoplespeople 7. √ 8.去掉 the 9. eithertoo 10. fastquickly
（四）
1.allboth 2.hadwas 3.nothingnone 4.seatedsat或后加myself 5.air前加the 6.andbut 7.had前加who
8.去掉with 9.until前加not 10.√
（五）
1.去掉was 2.去掉in 3.househouses
4.withas或wentgoing 5.√ 6.struckstrike 7.howeverso
8.terriblyterrible 9.theywe 10.instead后加of