专练三十一 短文写作

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【训练题一】

假设你是李华， 一位17岁的女孩， 英语成绩非常突出， 有两年英语家教的经验， 现在是学校“爱心俱乐部”的成员，认为志愿者工作能够使人树立信心，培养良好的交际技能。看到下面的招聘信息，你愿意利用这次机会，为需要帮助的儿童献出自己的微薄之力，同时增长见识，了解社会。

A Voluntary Activity

In the winter vacation

5 Volunteers WANTED

as English teacher

At S.O.S.Children’s Village

Those who are interested in taking part in the activity， please send an email to before Jan.25， 2010， explaining your past experiences and purposes for applying.

Students’ Union

请根据所给的中、英文提示完成下面的英文邮件。

注意：1. 词数120左右；

2. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好；

3. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：tutor家教 Loving Heart Club爱心俱乐部

Dear Students’ Union，

I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and I’m eager to become one of the Volunteer English teachers.

Yours sincerely

LiHua

【思路点拨】

本文要求写一封电子邮件，其开头和结尾已经给出，内容是向学生会提出申请，在寒假当一名志愿英语教师。其内容非常贴近学生生活，题目表述清晰，要求明确，体裁为书信。要写好这类文章，考生要有较好的语言表达能力，能较好地展示自己的优势和对申请工作的热爱。

第一步：审题。体裁为书信；人称用第一人称；时态以一般现在时为主。

第二步：提炼要点。写信的目的；自我介绍，要恰到好处地展示自己的才能和优势；申请该工作的意义。

第三步：遣词造句。如：have a good command of English；broaden our horizon and promote our understanding of the world；Only by helping those kids can I…；I’d greatly appreciate it if you could…；同时注意使用过渡词或句子，一定要使文章内容紧凑，语言连贯流畅。

最后，复查文章的时态呼应、人称、主谓一致性、字母大小写、词汇拼写、句子结构、连接词和内容要点是否齐全。

【参考范文】

Dear Students’ Union，

I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and I’m eager to become one of the Volunteer English teachers .

I’m Li Hua， a girl of 17， and I have a good command of English. For two years I have been tutoring two primary school kids in English. Presently I work as a member of Loving Heart Club in our school. Voluntary work has helped me build confidence and good communication skills.

In my opinion， being a volunteer teacher is obviously more than just teaching， furthermore， it is helpful to broaden our horizon and promote our understanding of the world. Meanwhile， I can make the most of my special talents and interests. Only by helping those kids can I make a big difference to their future and make contributions to society.

I’d greatly appreciate it if you could possibly consider my application. I’m looking forward to your early reply and please email me at .cn.

Yours sincerely

LiHua

【训练题二】

假设你是李华， 下面是你班班会上以“中学生是否能佩带手机”为题进行讨论的情况。请你写一封信给《高中生学习》杂志的编辑说明该情况，并附带表明你自己的观点。

注意：1. 要包含所有的要点，但不要逐条翻译；

2. 字数约120字。

3. 信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入字数。

参考词汇：radiation辐射 luxurious 奢侈的

Dear Sir，

I’m writing to tell you something about our discussion on the topic “Whether Middle School Students Can Carry Mobile phones （Cell phones）” at the class meeting.

Best wishes

Yours

LiHua

【思路点拨】

本文要求给杂志社编辑写封信，说明讨论的情况，从体裁看是书信，从内容看是有正反两种观点对比的议论文，讨论话题非常贴近学生生活实际，完成要点的基本表述并不困难。

第一步：审题。体裁为书信，写信对象是报社的编辑，因此要注意语言得体；信的内容是班会讨论的情况，因此时态以一般过去时为主。

第二步：提炼要点。赞同方的观点；反对方的观点；简要说明自己的观点。

第三步：遣词造句。如：agree， were against， communicate with， surf the Internet， harmful to health， get in touch with， it was convenient for them to…， 同时注意使用过渡词或句子，如：Besides， However， and等使文章内容紧凑。

最后，认真检查全文。

【参考范文】

Dear Sir，

I'm writing to tell you something about our discussion on the topic “Whether Middle School Students Can Carry Mobile phones （Cell phones）” at the class meeting.

Forty percent of the students agreed， for they thought it was convenient for them to communicate with their relatives and friends. They also thought they could surf the Internet to search for some information and store useful information in them. Besides， they could play games for rest if they feel tired after studying for a long time.

However， sixty percent of us were against it. They insisted the radiation of cellphones was harmful to health， and the ringing sound did affect the cellphone holders and others. Also， cellphones were luxurious things for middle school students and it was easy to lead them to compare with each other.

As far as I am concerned， I agree with the majority. It is not suitable for middle school students to have cellphones. We can get in touch with others by other means and we can read more books to enrich ourselves.

Best wishes.

Yours

LiHua