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针对高三文科学生英语写作水平比较薄弱的实际情况,本学期采用了循环背范文的方法,具体操作情况如下: 利用近几年的高考英语范文,或各省市模拟试题中的写作文章作为基本素材,选择比较典型的题材,体裁,进行背诵,仿句,仿写,举一反三,采取多种方式反复输入,以达到灵活输出与运用的目的。下面就以一篇文章为例:

近几年中国多个省份出现大旱,很多地方出现了人畜饮水困难。为增进学生对水资源缺乏和节约用水的认识,你校将举办主题为"WATER FOR LIFE"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请根据下面的信息提示写一篇英语发言稿,其内容应包括:

1.水资源缺乏的原因分析。2.提出节约用水的具体建议。

注意:1.词数120~150;2.开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:短缺-shortage干旱-drought

Part one: 例文分析

第一步:展示全文

Dear teachers and schoolmates,

It's a great honor for me to say something about the water shortage and some ways of saving water.

It's reported that many provinces suffered from drought and lots of people couldn't have access to/drink clean water. It has attracted the attention of more and more people. As we all know, many factors lead to the problem such as global warming, environmental pollution and growing population. If we didn't do something about it, the problem would become more and more severe.

Here are my suggested ways to save water in daily life. Firstly, we should form the good habit of using water such as turning off the tap when you are not actually using the water while brushing. Secondly, it's a good idea to recycle water. For example, the water used to clean vegetables 1t can be reused to water trees. Lastly, we can save water by employing water-conserving appliances at home.

In conclusion, everyone's contribution counts a lot when it comes to saving water.

第二步:同桌合作找出本文中的重点单词短语及句型。(学生根据情况查找,不要求所有同学答案一致)

第三步:师生交流,尤其是重点句型,因其中就包含了重点单词与短语。

(1) It's a great honor for me to……

(2)It's reported that……

(3) As we all know, many factors lead to the problem……

(4) Here are my suggested ways to save water in daily life.

(5) We should form the good habit of using water such as turning off the tap when you are not actually using the water while brushing.

(6)When it comes to saving water……

第四步: 背诵本文中含有以上句型的句子。

Part two:仿句(把下面的句子译成英语)。仿写的目的是提高学生运用的能力,以不变应万变。

第一步:学生独立完成。(通过前面的文章,学生有了基础) 1. 和大家分享关于气候变化的观点我感到很荣幸。(It's a great honor for me to)

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2. 我认为,多种因素导致了这种现象的发生。(As far as I'm concerned)

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3. 确实到了我们采取有效措施保护水资源的时候了。(It's high time that…)

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4. 总之,养成保护环境的习惯是非常重要的。(It's important to…)

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第二步:师生交流并给出参考答案。

1. It's a great honor for me to share my opinion on the climate change with you.

2. As far as I'm concerned, many factors lead to the phenomenon.

3. It's high time that we took effective measures to preserve the water resources.

4. In conclusion, it's important to form the good habit of protecting the environment.

第三步:学生背诵以上句子。

Part three: 仿写文章

假设你和几位同学成立了一个英语俱乐部,开展了为期两个月的活动。现在,你将代表俱乐部在课堂上进行经验交流,请你写一篇英语发言稿,主要内容如下:

1.简要描述俱乐部开展的一项与英语有关的主要活动;

2.谈谈你们开展该活动的收获。

第一步:通过前面两部分的铺垫,学生对写好类似文章有了一定的基础,独立完成后同桌相互评阅,共同提高。

第二步:展示范文

Hello,everyone!I am greatly honored to be here exchanging our experiences on English learning with all of you.

Two months ago we set up an English club aimed at improving our English learning enthusiasm and speaking skills. During the two months we had many kinds of activities such as acting English plays,debates,speech contests and so on. Of all the activities the English debates are particularly beneficial. For each debate we had a specific motion and we took active part in the debates. Through the debates,not only have we aroused the passion of the students of learning English but also our spoken English has been greatly improved. The organizers as well as the participants have benefited a lot from the club.

Thank you for your listening and welcome to join us!

第三步:根据范文再次修改自己的文章,找出自己的闪光点与不足之处,扬长避短。

第四步:找出本文亮点并背诵原文。

Part four:循环背诵范文。坚持背诵一周,每次约用5分钟时间课前检查,先检查英语水平较好的学生,最后检查英语基础较差的学生,目的是给他们留足充分的准备时间,以使他们成功背过,提高他们学好英语的信心,从而逐步提高他们的英语成绩。从本学期来看,确实起到了一定的效果。

Part five:默写范文。默写的目的是把背诵的内容落到实处,避免学生眼高手低,一说就会,一写就错。把所写内容烂熟于心。

其他题材,体裁的文章,采用同样的方法,仿写完后背范文,坚持一周检查,做到80%以上学生熟练过关。

三四种文章过后,用一周的时间把三四篇文章重新检查一遍,每次检测前再检查一遍,效果很好。