基础写作中的数据表达法

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从近几年的广东高考英语题来看，基础写作中经常涉及到不同形式的数据，如2007年，2008年，2009年，2010年和2011年均有不同形式的数据表达。因此熟悉和掌握各种数据的表达方法对高考英语基础写作的备考极为重要。

现将历年基础写作所给参考范文中含有数据的句子摘抄如下。

对这些含有数据的句子进行分析，我们可以得知，基础写作主要是对年份、年龄、数量、排名、比例等数据进行考查。高考在即，如何让考生高效地掌握数据表达法，让考生写出地道的英文句子表达呢？笔者归纳了一些实用的通关表达法。

一、时间的表达

1. 表世纪：during the 18th century，in the late 19th century

2. 表年份：in 2013，in the year 2013，in early/late 2013，in the 1980s

3. 表日期：on June 1， 2013

4. 表钟点：at 5 o’clock sharp，around 6 p.m.，at 5∶30

二、年龄的表达

a woman aged 30， at the age of 13，an 8-year-old girl，in one’s twenties

三、比例的表达

主要涉及到百分比的表达，“百分之几”可用以下表达：

60% /sixty percent/60 percent of the ...

half of the ... ；one fourth （a quarter of ...）； three quarters of；two thirds；seven eighths； three out of five， three in five

四、排名的表达

rank+ （the+）序数词，be + the+序数词， be + in the+序数词+place等；也可以用“is the+形容词最高级+范围”来表达。

五、总计的表达

... amount to ... / add up to / come to / sum up to

六、增减的表达

1. 数量增加

... increase / rise / grow / climb from ... to ...

The number sharply/rapidly/slowly/steadily went up/rose/increased/grew to...

2. 数量减少

... decrease / fall / drop from ... to ...

The number sharply/rapidly/slowly/steadily dropped/reduced/decreased to ...

七、倍数的表达

（be）+ 基数词 + times as + 形容词 + as ...

此外，在数据对比时，还常用到while，but，on the contrary，however，in contrast to等关联词语。

熟记以上语块的最好方法就是背诵相关的通关句型。俗话说：“词不离句，句不离篇”。除了要求学生背诵高考范文中出现的句子，笔者也适当增加了一些经典的例句。

1. Nearly 70% of us disagree because they think it makes them fall into the habit of dependence，while about 30% of my classmates think it necessary for our parents to accompany us.

2. Guangzhou，a city with a population of about thirteen million，has a history of more than 2，200 years.

3. Covering a total area of 7，434 square kilometers， this city has a population of about ten million.

4. Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours， and we’ll be back at about 11：00.

There are 39 people injured in the accident，among whom three quarters / three quarters of whom are children.

5. Toyota sold about 8.42 million cars last year， ranking the first in the world.

6. According to the research，the elder people drink twice more tea than the younger ones.

7. Statistics shows that teenagers buy four times more bottled drinks than adults.

即时练习

刚的对348，495位年龄在7～22周岁的学生体质调查结果表明，中小学生超重与肥胖率继续攀升，具体情况如下表：

【写作内容】

请根据以上内容写一篇演讲稿参加学校关于“健康”这个话题的演讲，内容包括：

1. 调查问题以及调查对象；

2. 调查结果及社会效应；

3. 比较数据，分析男生和女生在该问题上的差异，以数据为例；

4. 比较数据，分析城市学生和农村学生在该问题上的差异，以数据为例。

【写作要求】

1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容；

2. 演讲稿格式和开头已给出，不计入句子总数。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

Good morning，everyone！Today I’m honored to be here to give a speech about health.

参考范文

Good morning， everyone！ Today I’m honored to be here to give a speech about health. Recently a report on a survey carried out on a total of 348，495 students aged between 7 and 22 has been put out. The report， which indicates that the rates of obesity and overweight among students are rising， has given rise to a lot of concern in the society. According to the report，conclusions can be drawn that the problem is more serious in the city than in the country. For example，43.7% of the students in the city are above normal weight，much more than the 30.43% in the countryside. Besides， the problem is more serious among boys than girls with 46.76% of the boys and 27.37% of the girls above normal weight.

（作者单位：陆丰市东海龙潭中学）

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